Sunday, 22 August 2010

Word and Question poem

Enbrethiliel organised another W&Q and I tried a senryu this time.

My word: Drums
My question: Who's at the door?

(picture was taken to accompany this poem and is entirely set-up just as the poem is. Yes: I know what you're thinking Demented Wench!)

Drums pounding loudly
Who's at the door so early?
My mistake: Hangover


Enbrethiliel said...


Oh, a haiku! I'm delighted that you wrote one, Sully.

And now I'm laughing at the way you used "drums"! The poem works as a stand-alone, of course, but knowing your word and question makes me appreciate it on an extra level. And yes, it is funny! =D

PS--If this was inspired by a recent hangover, then I hope you're okay now! ;-)

Demented Wench said...

Wild Pig.

I like the poem. :)

Salome Ellen said...

Love it! It takes me at least 14 lines to work in the prompts. You rock it with 17 syllables. :-)

Stella (Ex Libris) said...

Haha! Great poem and love the setting, it's fitting! :-D

Dauvit Balfour said...

Haha, nice! I recognize my own word; I had forgotten it for a while. I'll have to remember this for the future.